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Tuesday, 5 March 2019

The Uninvited Guest

A story by Eve

My name is Alexander.  I am a magnificent black, silky black cat with emerald eyes.   I live in a Maison de Maître in Burgundy with a charming garden.   I own a rather pretty lady called Isabelle, she hates when I kill birds.   Nonsense!   I do kill them but never bring them to her anymore.    The screams and being called a “bad cat” is not very nice.   But I really don’t care.   To do my evil deeds I go to the neighbours, the Macrons, a very nice couple who dote on me.  I get tidbits of salmon, turkey etc.   They would love to have me but I can’t do that to Isabelle,  she adores me.
I am always welcome at the Macrons except when they have guest for a meal.   Because I do beg for a morsel, climb on laps, I can be quite a pest in their eyes not in mine.   I just do what I like when I like, that’s it.  So I am banished outside when people come.   The other day, I heard Isabelle mention the Macrons were having a garden party, garden means outside, there is no way they’ll keep me out and it sounds like fun.   I just can’t wait. 
Today is garden party day and I am ready, hiding in the lovely hydrangeas, looking at the guests, I spot a lovely little girl.  I will zero in on her when they are all seated and eating.   Everybody sits, chatting happily, no one looking around except the Macron’s who are looking for me but I bide my time and start to slink toward the girl who has seen me and tries to get my attention.  She is holding a piece of salmon in her chubby hand.   Everybody was too busy eating, talking to notice me so I took the salmon, ate it very daintily and here comes another one, great.   But, all of a sudden I heard Isabelle’s voice ;  I didn’t know she was here, asking the little girl what she was doing.   The stupid child told her in a loud voice that she was giving salmon to a black cat.   Bedlam … Isabelle and the Macrons got up looking for me, but I was quicker and went under the tables.  It was tally Ho for me, I had so much fun, running around, some tried to grab me but I was too fast.  I could hear “Alexander, Alexander come to Mama, come here.   Like I ever come when called!  Finally I got tired of the game, ran through the hydrangeas very proud of myself. 
I had the best garden party ever even if I wasn’t invited.


Paula's story:

Bobby was wracking his brain. His wife’s birthday was coming up, and he wanted to make it special. But how was he going to top last year, his wife’s 50th, when he sent her and her sister to her beloved Paris for a week? Bobby prided himself on being the master of the grand gesture, but he was stumped. Then, an idea began to take shape. A great idea, a sly idea. He picked up his phone and dialed a number in North Carolina, and set his plan in motion.

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Julia murmured, “OK, bye for now,” into her phone, set it on her desk and stared at her calendar. She just might be able to make this work, she thought. She would have to move a few meetings, cancel a few plans, but it would be so worth it. It was a wonderful idea, and so like Bobby: generous, and sweet. And oh, so sly.

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Ingrid was snuggled into a corner of the sofa, one cat on her lap and one nestled beside her. It was her birthday, she had taken the day off work, and it had been a great day so far. It started with a long walk in the park, then she had met her sister for a lazy, champagne-fueled lunch at their favorite French bistro, followed by an afternoon of shopping. And now, she was watching an old movie, waiting for her husband to get home with her favorite Chinese takeout. He had an afternoon meeting, he had told her, but he should be able to get home, dinner in hand, by 7.

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She heard his key turn in the lock, and she paused the movie. “I’m watching ‘It’s A Wonderful Life’!” she called, as she heard his footsteps in the hallway. “Come on, it’s getting to the good part!” Bobby walked into the living room, laughing. “You would say every part of that movie is the good part,” he told her, as he set a shallow box filled with the familiar red and white takeout boxes on the cocktail table in front of her. “Bobby!” she cried. “That’s enough food for an army! What’s gotten into you?” At that, he turned toward the hall, and she followed his gaze. There, standing in the doorway, looking uncharacteristically shy, was her best friend, Julia. Ingrid screamed, jumped off the sofa, and rushed to hug her friend, laughing, and crying, asking Bobby what the hell, how did he manage this without her knowing, what a great birthday surprise. Then, everyone was talking at once: Bobby, telling Ingrid how he had tried to figure out how to make her birthday really special; Julia, saying how she was amazed that Bobby was so determined to fly her down to New Orleans to surprise Ingrid; Ingrid, trying to work out how she had been so clueless, and already on the phone to her boss, asking for another day or two off work so she could spend as much time as possible with Julia.

*****
The next few days were a blur of lunches, shopping, talking, walking, dinners, playing their favorite board games, drinking champagne, watching their favorite movies, Bobby on the fringes in the evenings, filling their glasses, doing the washing up, tucking them into bed when they drank a bit too much. Ingrid and Julia called Julia’s house, to talk to Ingrid's dear goddaughter and her sister, and Julia’s husband: yes, they had all known about it, yes, what a fantastic surprise, yes, they wish they could all be there. At night, alone in their bed, Ingrid would wrap her arms around Bobby, nestle into his shoulder, and murmur, “You always give me the best gifts.”

Three days later, Ingrid had to get back to work, even though Julia would be there for two more days. Because Ingrid worked at night, she and Julia had most of the day together, and at 3 o’clock, as Ingrid headed off to the office, she said plaintively, “What will you and Bobby do while I’m gone?” Julia smiled and said, “Don’t worry. We’ll think of something. But mainly, we will wait for you to get home.” “Well, you better stay up,” Ingrid told her. “I know you, Julia. You’re a lightweight. I get off work at 11, so pace yourself.” Julia grinned, and said, “Text or call when you’re about to leave work. I’ll be up and ready.”

Ingrid called home a few times during the evening, aching to be there with her husband and her best friend, and every time, Bobby would remind her, “Text or call when you’re leaving. Julia wants to make sure she’s awake for you.”

*****

It was 9 p.m. and Julia was wide awake, stretched out naked on top of Bobby, their sweat mingling on the sheets of Bobby and Ingrid’s bed. “What a brilliant idea,” Julia whispered, still out of breath. They were feeling pretty proud of themselves, pulling this off. Living in different states, it had been a challenge, over the last decade, to find time to be together. This “birthday surprise” was perhaps Bobby’s finest idea, because not only was Ingrid happy; she thought it was all for her.

*****
Ingrid wanted to surprise her best friend. She got off work early, and softly mounted the steps to the apartment. She slipped her key into the door. The living room and bedroom were across the hall from each other, at the back. When she stepped silently inside, she heard muffled voices, but something wasn’t right. The living room was on the right. These sounds were coming from the left, the master bedroom. She walked down the hall and reached for the bedroom door . . .

*****
There are moments in life that forever are defined by Before and After. What do you do when you realize in a shocking flash of discovery that two of the most important relationships in your life are over, at the same time? What do you do when the full breadth and depth of betrayal comes into immediate, shocking focus, when you learn just how deceitful people you thought you knew could be? For a long time after that night, Ingrid would deal with what her therapist helped her understand were three betrayals: his, hers, and theirs, together.

*****
As the years passed, Ingrid came to realize that her birthday surprise, the uninvited guest, was the best thing that ever happened to her. The Book of John was right: The truth shall set you free. There is life, and truth, on the other side of betrayal, she learned. And most important, there is love.



A story by Annemarie:


The Uninvited Guest

I remember when I was invited to a fancy dress party (among people I knew or 'sort of' knew) when I was newly engaged;  though I say it myself,  I did look good - my shiny black hair in a swinging bob and fringe, surmounted with gold hairband, decorated with a brilliant blue lapis lazuli snake;  the artfully  draped sheet around me was clinched  with golden  belt and bejewelled buckle, and a plethora of gold and 'jewels from the orient' around my neck, all made, painted and decorated by my little niece – I was Cleopatra embodied and I felt so good!
This time however I was a little older and I had been invited to a 'vicars and tarts' party ( I know, it is a curiously English way of entertainment). I plucked courage in both hands and accepted the invitation as it was from one of the teachers (the only one who had been welcoming during the 3 months I had worked my 2-day week supply teaching at that school). The staff room can be a very isolating place and this could be a means of really getting to know the other stand-offish(?) teachers.
I would certainly not dress up as a vicar; no, a full-on outrageous tart and they would realise what a fun person I really was and then life in the staff room would be a whole lot better.
This is when charity shops and TK Max are so useful.  I spent a day trawling the shops and came home with my glittering bounty. A good uplift bra (a tart needs a cleavage after all), some black lacy patterned tights and very fancy black suspender belt,  a figure-hugging purple dress which just covered my derrière.  I was beginning to look forward to discover this other me.  After a lazy scented bubble bath  it was on with the black underwear, a bit of a struggle to slither into the shiny purple dress, just covering my derriere and a glimpse of suspender;  plenty of chunky gold necklaces, (my Cleopatra moment), bangles and gold hoop earrings); then my makeup: this was beginning to be fun - a smear of lilac eyeshadow topped with a swish of silver glitter, a pair of thick fake eyelashes and a generous lashing of deep crimson lipstick. Last of all deep crimson nails. My long dark hair I scrunched and teased into a spiky mess and added  a quick spray of purple to cap it all. I didn't look half bad - in fact I looked completely bad! I picked up a little glitzy bag and a pair of high-heeled shoes and, running late, drove off to my friend's house.
Arriving at her road I suddenly realised I had forgotten to bring the invite with the address and I couldn't remember the house number only having been there once;  then I saw all the parked cars. Yes,  this was the right house. I parked the car, put my shoes on, pushed my boobs up, niceand pert and tottered to the door. A little nervous I rang the bell and after a few minutes the door was opened by a somewhat older man than I had imagined Mary's husband to be. It was also eerily quiet for a raucous fancy dress party. He looked me up and down …and up again;  “Can I help you?”
 “ Yes,” I said “I’ve come for Mary's party. I've got the right day I hope.”
“Well no Mary  lives here... but you are welcome to come in.”
Muttering profuse apologies and trying not to fall over in my stiletto heels whilst trying to shrink my chest back into its uplift bra I hurried back to the car. Mortified, I sat there all dressed up, not knowing where to go. I knew I had the right road so I drove slowly along the houses and there it was;  a road leading to a field with what looked like a cricket club or some sort of hall and plenty of cars. Of course, Mary's husband was cricket mad so they must have hired the pavilion for their party. I parked the car and for a second time tottered along  to the building. Lots of noise from within which was a heartening sign - so I banged on the door. It opened and before me stood a gentleman in immaculate dinner jacket (a bit strange I thought for a vicar). His eyes stood on stalks as he surveyed me and over his shoulder were many more immaculately dressed guests, men in dj's and women in evening dress, and not a suspender belt to be glimpsed  anywhere and amongst them the parents of Daniel Palmer (year 4’s class swot) staring straight at me.
“I don't think I’ve got the right address... is this Mary Conochie's party?”
I was already slinking away in total humiliation as he said:
“I think you have the wrong address.”
I never did get to know those teachers well.




Jackie's story:


Hannah parked her battered rusty 2CV Citroen and was surprised at the number of expensive gleaming cars lined up in the paved courtyard of this splendid 18th Century Chateau.   she hesitated at the entrance … it was this evening the Count and Countess had asked her to come for a drink …  ….. a sudden thought made her wonder if she had got the wrong date 
Her host opened the door, a glass of bubbles in hand  Ahhhh  “My dear”,   he looked her up and down, frowned then welcomed her … “you’ve arrived ! ” ….. and whisked her into a room full of formal dinner jackets and sparkly evening gowns.  

Clad in cotton shirt and jeans the other guests received her as stiffly as white linen left out in the frost for the night.    Not accustomed to the high life “My dear” as she mimicked to herself lived at the Chateau’s estate, looked after the many animals there, surrounded by dogs,cats and goats, dressed in overalls and rubber boots;   mucking out, milking and hardly went out in the evenings.     She certainly had nothing anywhere near sparkly chic in her wardrobe.   She thought to herself thank goodness I didn’t come in my mucky farm boots….

Feeling awkward and distressed at being very underdressed at this very chic razzle dazzle party Hannah just wanted to disappear down a hole in the floor. 

 At this, she glanced down at the beautiful parquet Versailles and to her surprise down by the skirting board was a tiny mouse.    His whiskers quivering - little brown eyes alert, ears as pink as rose petals, and nose twitching nervously.    “ Oh miss” baby mouse cried and she bent down to listen  …  “I’ve lost my mummy could you help me find her”
Goodness Hannah thought, how in the world was she going to find a mummy mouse in this very elegant and refined soirée.   Most of the guests present would run a mile just at the word ‘mouse’ .   So putting the baby mouse in the pocket of her jeans she set off to mingle with the guests.  
She sipped banalities and swallowed her discomfort of unfortunate dress sense until the butler announced « Ladies and Gentlemen, dinner is served…… » 

There in the centre of the table was the most beautiful floral display.  A magnificent woodland log planted with different shades of moss interspersed with leaves of silver birch and ash brown branches  - Textures of pines, ferns and wild wispy delicate purple flowers poking through with the whitest of snowdrops - the different hues of botanical treasures were a delight to the eye.  
But, in the middle of this fabulous display poking its little face through the bark was evidently a Mummy mouse.  Round, brown and plainly distressed.     “My baby, my baby” she squealed frantically, and became more and more hysterical - the shrieking was thankfully drowned by the chatter, laughter and clamour of knives and forks on china.   But, it wouldn’t be long, Hannah thought, before someone spotted Mummy mouse as there she was,  perched on the large green lily leaf that was draped artistically across the table and she could just imagine that if seen the ho hah that would cause.   
Inside her pocket she could feel the agitation of baby mouse upon hearing her mothers cry.   Squirming and trying to look dignified she reached in her pocket to reassure the tiny creature but by a twist of her hand the baby mouse escaped onto the table - running circles amongst the silver,  slithered up and down the candelabras, knocking over wine glasses and finally found refuge in the central woodland display where mother mouse gathered her up in her paws.  

The sight of those finely dressed sophisticated ladies attempting to escape a tiny helpless mouse by clambering on chairs - thus ripping their taffetas and silk gowns, twisting their ankles on their high heels;  the men in a flap waving bow ties, flailing arms and hopping up and down had Hannah in fits of laughter - 
After the guests had calmed down, (some of them had left without finishing their dinner)  she thought what fun it was  being an uninvited guest.

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